Tuesday, 10 June 2014

As part of our Inquiry and Reading Focus work about the ANZAC's Dinah completed an A-Z with items that she has read about.  Here is some of her work:


ANXIOS ARMY MEN FIGHTING IN THE BATTLE OF GALLIPOLI .
BOMBS HITTING THE GROUND OUTSIDE THE SOLDIERS TRENCHES.
CONQUERING THE ARMY THEY WERE FACING IN THE BATTLE OF CHUNUK BAIR.
DUMPING THE BODIES OF THE SOLDIERS ON THE WET GROUND.
EATING BISCUITS HARD AS BRICKS IN THERE SMALL HUTS.
FINDING BONES AND GUNS SCATTERED ON THE GROUND.
GALLIPOLI IS THE FIRST PLACE THAT THE NZ SOLDIERS FOUGHT A BATTLE IN WWI.
HAVING A BIG AND SCAREY JOURNEY AS THE WAR GOES ON.
IN THE WAR THE SOLDIERS COULD ONLY WASH THEMSELVES IN THE SALTY SEA.
JUMPING ARUOND SHOOTING AT THEIR ENEMIES.
KILLING THE PEOPLE IN WAR WHO THEY WERE FIGHTING.
LOOTING THE TRENCHES TO FIND A WEAPON TO SHOOT WITH.
MAKING THE SOLDIERS LEAVE THE WAR WHEN IT WAS OVER.
KNOCKING DOWN THE HUTS OF THE ENEMIES.
OVER TAKING THE SOLDIERS WEAPONS.
PLACING THE DEAD BODIES UNDER GROUND IN THE CEMETERY.
QUIVERING AS THE WINTERS COLDNESS GOES THROUGH HIS BODY.
RISKING MY LIFE FOR MY BEST, BEST BUDDY.
SAVING LIFE AS THE DAYS OF WAR GOES ON.
TALKING AND MAKING A PLAN OF HOW TO DEFEAT THE ENEMIES.
USELESS WEAPONS START FALLING ONTO THE GRUONG.
VOLTS OF LIGHTNING MAKE STEAM RISE FROM THE GROUND.
WAKING UP TO HEAR THE BOMBS HITTING THE WALLS.
EXAMINING  THE MENS BODIES FOR BONES.
YELLING AND SCREAMING FOR HELP AS HIS HEART GETS SHOT.
ZOOMING THROUGH THE BATTLE FIELDS LIKE A SPEEDY GODZILLA.

1 comment:

  1. Wow Dinah that is some amazing work you have completed. I really like how you have taken it to the next step and written a sentence for each letter instead of just single words. Keep up the great work Room 14.
    Miss Ogle

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